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Breaking Bad Script Pt1

created Feb 9th 2023, 15:10 by Interges


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EXT. WHITE HOUSE - DAWN
Early morning. A faint glow in the sky. Silence except for
the THWACK-THWACK of the NEWSPAPER GUY driving past.
INT. WHITE HOUSE - KITCHEN - DAWN
walt sits alone at the kitchen table, staring into space.
Deep in thought. Considering something carefully. He rises,
picks up the phone and dials. Keeps his voice low.
WALT
Hank? Hey, it's Walt. I didn't
wake you, did I?
(a beat)
Good. Listen, I've been thinking.
Could I take you up on your offer?
The ride-along?
EXT. BLUE-COLLAR NEIGHBORHOOD - MORNING
CUT TO:
A different morning -- these things take time to set up.
We're in a neighborhood not unlike Walt's. A non-descript
Ford is parked at the curb, blended in with the other cars.
HANK (O.S.)
It's down there on the cul-de-sac.
White? Kinda redwood-looking trim?
INT. FORD - MORNING - CONTINUOUS
Hank sits behind the wheel. A subordinate agent, GOMEZ, is
beside him. Hank is pointing out the TARGET HOUSE to Walt,
who sits in the back seat in an ill-fitting bulletproof vest.
HANK
See it?
WALT
Yeah.
Tiny house, a block down the street. Not at all noteworthy.
WALT
(quiet interest)
That's a meth lab.
HANK
So says our snitch. Says some dude
who goes by "Cap' n Cook" lives up
to his name in there. Got himself
a three pound flask and keeps it
bubbling day and night. Says he
always adds a dash of chili powder.
(to Gomez)
Ah, you exuberant Mexicans.
GOMEZ
Uh-uh. "Cap'n Cook?" that's a
white boy's name. Dopey as hell.
HANK
Yeah? I got twenty bucks says he's
a beaner.
GOMEZ
You're on.
A yellow SCHOOL BUS chugs into frame, driving past.
HANK
Ah, here we go. Finally.
(into his radio)
School bus is clear. You got the
green light.
An affirmation comes back. Hank starts his engine.
HANK
(smiling, to Walt)
watch this. This makes 'em shit.
25.
Out of the distance, we hear a BIG ENGINE REVVING, speeding
our way. A TRUCK roars past, heading for the cul-de-sac.
Hank slowly follows it in his Ford -- just so Walt can see.
Hank hums Ride Of The Valkyries, channeling "Apocalypse Now."
Walt's POV: as seen through the windshield, the lead truck
goes speeding into the target house's driveway. An ENTRY
TEAM of six agents jumps out, looking like they just came
from the set of a sci-fi movie -- they're covered head-to-toe
in CHEMICAL SUITS and RESPIRATOR GEAR. They carry carbines
and shotguns. One man lugs a battering ram.
HANK
Meth labs are nasty on a good day -- but when you mix that stuff wrong,
you wind up with mustard gas.
WALT
Phosgene gas, I think.
HANK
Yeah, exactly. One whiff'll kill
you. That's why the moon suits.
26.
Walt nods, watches the entry team take position at the door.
INT. TARGET HOUSE - KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS
To call this a shithole would be an insult to shitholes
everywhere. There's filthy clothes, overflowing garbage,
rotting pizza boxes dating to the Clinton administration •••
along with stacked cannisters of plumber's lye and Coleman
stove fuel. A rambling, Rube Goldberg lab of hoses and
buckets stands out against the knotty pine panelling.
A Mexican man, EMILIO, sits at the kitchen table, listening
to headphones -- oblivious to the o.s. BANGING at the door.
He's got an enormous mound of RED POWDER in front of him, and
an even bigger pile of MATCHBOOKS on the floor.
He scrapes off the striker strips and collects the powder.
This is a source of red phosphorus for meth production.
BOOOM! The front door busts open. Feds pour in, pointing
guns and breathing through their masks like Darth Vader.
Emilio nearly pisses himself. He starts to run for it, but
doesn't get far. The agents hold him down, cuff him.
EXT. TARGET HOUSE - MORNING
Hank, Gomez and Walt wait in the Ford. The RADIO crackles.
AGENT (RADIO V.O.)
House is clear. We've got one
suspect in custody.
HANK
Copy that. The suspect ••• might he
be of the Latin persuasion?
AGENT (RADIO V.O.)
Si, Senor.
Hank triumphantly puts a hand out. Gomez grumbles and pays
him his twenty.  

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